Hello again! I watched your Google presentation, I must say, you seem to be a pretty well balanced person. From dancing, to poetry, to your faith and your career choice as a councilor or a teacher! I can see that you have a bright future ahead of you. I also can kind of relate to your college experience, I was the first in my family to go to college. I will be the first in my family to graduate from graduate school! I have extremely high goals for myself and I set very high goals for myself because I want to be the best I can possibly be and college is allowing me to do so. See, I am aspiring to be a football coach, why? Because I too love to guide people and I want people to be as successful as they can be and that's the best way I can do it. I really enjoyed your presentation. I'd like to make you aware that I did see just a few small errors though. In slide 11 you said: "I never had any lessons until this fall of 2011 and the feeling", I think that it would be a little bit clearer to write an extra "past" between this and fall so the sentence reads like this: "I never had any lessons until this past fall of 2011 and the feeling." And just a tiny little type on slide 12: "Poetry was introduced to me when I was in the 5th grade. Every since then it has been a passion of mine." It would be better if you changed "Every" to "Ever" in the beginning of the 2nd sentence. Again, I think that your presentation was very good :) and I wish you good luck on your journey! God Bless
Hi! I really enjoyed watching your presentation about you. I love that you started it off with church because church is an essential part of my life. You seem to have had a very interesting life. I also can relate to the sports you had in your presentation. I love sports and love taking part in them. I thought you did a very good job with your presentation, and it was nice to get to know a little bit about you! :) Jessica Scarpa
Hello again! I watched your Google presentation, I must say, you seem to be a pretty well balanced person. From dancing, to poetry, to your faith and your career choice as a councilor or a teacher! I can see that you have a bright future ahead of you. I also can kind of relate to your college experience, I was the first in my family to go to college. I will be the first in my family to graduate from graduate school! I have extremely high goals for myself and I set very high goals for myself because I want to be the best I can possibly be and college is allowing me to do so.
ReplyDeleteSee, I am aspiring to be a football coach, why? Because I too love to guide people and I want people to be as successful as they can be and that's the best way I can do it. I really enjoyed your presentation.
I'd like to make you aware that I did see just a few small errors though. In slide 11 you said: "I never had any lessons until this fall of 2011 and the feeling", I think that it would be a little bit clearer to write an extra "past" between this and fall so the sentence reads like this: "I never had any lessons until this past fall of 2011 and the feeling."
And just a tiny little type on slide 12: "Poetry was introduced to me when I was in the 5th grade. Every since then it has been a passion of mine." It would be better if you changed "Every" to "Ever" in the beginning of the 2nd sentence.
Again, I think that your presentation was very good :) and I wish you good luck on your journey! God Bless
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your presentation about you. I love that you started it off with church because church is an essential part of my life. You seem to have had a very interesting life. I also can relate to the sports you had in your presentation. I love sports and love taking part in them. I thought you did a very good job with your presentation, and it was nice to get to know a little bit about you! :)
Jessica Scarpa